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#i don't like being negative about things but i do want to say i am a little dissapointed in some aspects of wilmon's relationship in this se#mainly in communication & just wille's behaviour towards simon in general tbh. though he definitely has reasons - i just can't be happy wit#-h it. still love the show though#just some points where i'm a little let down#Like i said i am not a negative person! i still have good hopes for e6! PLUS i am so glad for what we got either way#and i can also imagine things differently myself lol i have no problem with that#*!also i feel like i need to rewatch some things before placing any final judgements#just i know some things didn't feel quite the same as before this season#once again this point lol:#Like i said i am not a negative person! i still have good hopes for s3! PLUS i am so glad for what we got either way.#yr s3 spoilers#i feel really obnoxious posting my chaotic ramblings in the main text so now we get this 💀#sayingthing#Yeah I am also subtly trying to show my dislike for people who just talk shit about everything here#I do not vibe with that#Though critique is fine#All bad bad horrible eughh is just not my taste#yr thoughts
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I really want to see a more fucked up version of Charlie in canon. Like, okay, I am a die-hard for sweet bubbly girls in media. But I always see how some people make Charlie actually, oh I dunno... demonic? And it's so refreshing for her type of character. I could honestly see her having low empathy (and we kinda see this with how she handled Angel's situation or even Vaggie's nervousness about taking control on an activity). An exploration of that trait (if it was intended) would be interesting to see for a protagonist, especially when her main goal is about helping others. I would love to see her actually have a level of difficulty in understanding others' feelings from the other residents, sinners, and even her father.
But give her a fucked up side. Not a "she gets more power when she's angey uwu", but a "oh, she's a little fucked in the head". It would give so much to her character that she just doesn't have.
@/murmurmurena (don't wanna bother them so slash there we go) has some fun ideas with Charlie. I highly encourage people to check their stuff out! So many fun dark ideas with her character while also still keeping to her canon personality pretty well! Personally, I think Charlie being a bit more naive to her own messed up traits would work best but her also being aware of these traits can make for some interesting character for her.
THIS FIC, "A Game Between You and I". RIGHT HERE WITH THE FIRST CHAPTER. A bit of spoil for the fic here: but I love how they handled Charlie’s absolute ignorance as to why the idea of Russian roulette is horrifying to Angel Dust. It doesn't feel like her being intentionally malicious or aware that she's the odd man out here. This is also a pretty old fic going by only the pilot, but the point still stands that it was such a fun take for her character!
Charlie is one of my favorite characters in the show in part of the POTENTIAL she could have as being the most bubbly sweetheart character while also being the most messed up character in the show. I can't say I have strong confidence with the show's writing and fully expect them to stick with Charlie being the "nice girl but oh no, don't get her angry or she gets scarwy". Which isn't bad for a character mind you, there's just so much more potential to Charlie outside of that trope, especially when you get into the theories of her either being a doll, Roo's biological daughter, or what have you. And for the MAIN CHARACTER of the show, it would be not only interesting but also bring the spotlight back to her.
There's really no question that the side characters steal the show, particularly all the male characters. If I'm honest, Charlie does not feel like she gets a lot of love from the show itself when she's supposed to be the main character. She feels far more flat compared to the rest of the characters (again, the male cast in this "female-lead" show has more depth than most of the female cast currently. I wouldn't be pointing this tidbit concerning the genders of characters if it weren't for the fact Viv defended Helluva's lack of development with their female cast by saying "Hazbin is a female-lead show and Helluva is a male-lead" and Hazbin ended up with it not feeling female lead (to me) and the male cast just completely stealing the show. I don't normally care about gender stuff, especially since I do personally lean interest towards male characters. But using one show as a defense for poor development of the female characters, and then that show not really holding up with no very interesting well-developed feeling female characters irritates me. It's just very clear that these shows don't seem to care much about the female cast :/)
If you like how Charlie is written that's totally fine. PERSONALLY, I just think they're missing so much opportunity with her character by just making her the standard female character type. I honestly don't have a lot of faith they'll actually do something with Charlie's character though. She's a pretty static character in S1 being the same from start to end. Not changing or learning anything to create any development. What does the end of season Charlie do that start of season Charlie wouldn't do? Fight back? Because we see with the pilot (which is the “first episode”) that Charlie does fight people if pushed like with Katie Killjoy and even Valentino. Static characters can work in media depending on the show or their role. But Charlie is the MC of a show about “bettering one's self”. So to have her as a static with not a lot of strong dilemmas for herself (like we see with Angel Husk Al and even Vox) seems silly. Plus, considering Hazbin is telling a whole story and it's not a fun episodic thing, characters are expected to grow on some level. Or else, what was the point of their hero's journey?
#I honestly have a lot of problems with Hazbin's storytelling#That the limited time of doing plot doesn't even help it and shouldn't be used to shield the show from criticisms#Especially when you can find the same issues in Helluva Boss that has no excuse with the writing (though it's getting a bit better)#I love this show but goodness gracious it makes me have a tangent about it#Charlie's unimpactful character writing just being one of MANY issues#Hopefully the crew take all the criticisms into account for S3#S2 if possible would be nice but they probably had it all scripted by the time S1 was airing.#No shame on the female cast either they're fine. But when you compare them to the given depth of characters like Angel Husk Alastor and Vox#They're pretty lackluster. Vaggie's probably the closest to a female character with a lot of layers we've seen in the show#And she wasn't done very well with being essentially just “Charlie's GF” with not much identity outside of that explored much#Some of this may be more personal takes but it's frustrating. Again I don't normally care about gender stuff in media#It was just the excuse to Millie and Loona lacking development that bothers me#Like Hazbin is supposed to make up Helluva's poor writing of their main female leads#Loona got a bit of love with the Bee ep and Verosika and Octavia are pretty good. Particularly V with her relationship with Blitz#Whenever I start talking about aspects of Hazbin's writing I always end up ranting a bit (⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)⁄#Celtrist#cel rambles#hazbin hotel#hazbin hotel charlie#charlie morningstar#hazbin critique#hazbin criticism#hazbin critical#hazbin hotel critical#hazbin hotel criticism#hazbin hotel critique#hazbin hotel rant#You can really love something and still be critical with it#I do it out of love I swear#You're not in the Sonic fandom for like 22 yrs and don't learn to be critical of the media you enjoy lol
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the delight i feel seeing u on my dash again literally cannot be overstated. you are literally the reason i have a tumblr lmao. when i was just a little tween trying to find content for the movies i loved so much ur blog and fanfics were literally like finding the holy grail
i still think about “just fur you” with incredible frequency and forever hold the idea that hiccup made her hood close to my heart. (also your coffeeshop soulmate fic was the first time i ever saw either of those tropes and is also so near and dear to me 🩵)
also! as a live action remake hater seeing a reminder of the og movies is fantastic ;) i hope wherever you’ve been you’ve been well!!
HELLO!!! hi. pardon me i have to bounce around the walls like i am a DVD logo pingponging within the confines of a TV screen. i will return once i strike a corner [ x days later......... ] really, though — this message is so heartwarming; thank you for reaching out, for writing it, for sharing your kindness with me. it's wildly affirming that my art meant that much to you back then and that some of that joy is still felt today :') <3 i've been repressing some Self-Consciousness about my old work getting read again because the live action is rippling through the community, but you've put so much of it to rest with this. thank you. truly. ogughgHH i'm glad that there are people in the same corner about not loving live actions. if any movie were to encourage me to be more open-minded it *would* be HTTYD, and if nothing else i'm so excited for the resurgence of people enjoying the world and its characters and themes and music. i just,,, probably won't see it in theaters? idk? i'd like to, it would be fun, i'd enjoy Talking About It and exchanging opinions, but in general it's been hard for me to start new things. i've been finding a lot of comfort in rewatches and being in quiet corners where hype doesn't make me feel pressured to create, so i totally second you — it's a welcome reminder that the animated trilogy will always be there for us! and i am hopeful that i'll get to share my growth as a writer with this lovely circle again :3 thanks for the well wishes — it's been a ROUGH year, but i've learned a lot and i'm happy to be where i am. how are you?? if you had to describe your feelings for the last month of 2025, what are three words you would use???
#asktrxd#JUST FUR YOU is the goofiest fic name pun ever but it makes me so happy that it has resonated for this long#tbh i would want to see the live action in person just to cosplay in a theater so... here's to making That an art project for next year#hiccup's actor is 5'7" though and with that alone im like [snmniff. snork. snrmmmnnvv.] im fine its fine we will always have httyd 1 hiccup#i also. erm. havent read cowell's books despite loving books? so i dont have *that* much room to critique adaptations of this story#anyhoo i havent seen the trailer and my feelings are still developing so i'm gonna enjoy the ressuscitation of community for what it is:#WE FROGGIN LOVE DRAGONS HERE!!!!!
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How do you find the writing in veilguard? I won't be able to play it for a while but I'm curious how it holds up because I've heard it reads like a YA novel or that it tells instead of showing. (I'm definitely taking online reviews with a grain of salt.) Is it enjoyable writing, especially the dialogue?
Frankly, the dialogue is fine. It is nothing more "YA novel" than anything done in Inquisition that I can think of--though I do generally take umbrage with any criticism phrased like that simply for being entirely too unspecific to mean anything at all. It implies the dialogue is unsophisticated by invoking a genre that, in actuality, represents a wide variety of writing quality (just like any genre of anything ever). I've read YA novels darker and more sophisticated than some piles of adult books, just as much as vice-versa. It's a lazy critique that tells you nothing. Is all the dialogue utterly fantastic? I mean, probably not but I'm having too much honest fun to waste my time worrying about if something is kind of cliched. My biggest pros for the writing are that a) Rook has an actual personality, and b) I don't have to wade into an empty field for an hour just to hear my companions say one line of dialogue to each other (Inquisition, the game that you were, you gave me such low standards). Your mileage may vary on what you think is good writing or not personally but I think the dialogue is just fine--and, yeah. A grain of salt is good to have with critiques like that. If they can't give clear examples and break down what they mean by that in more depth, I tend to ignore critiques of that variety in favor of my own opinions, which I recommend you do for yourself as well.
#telling instead of showing...i don't even know where to begin with that because i have no idea what it's trying to reference#what are they telling instead of showing?? i feel like i've seen everything i've been told??#like these kinds of critiques are the kind of thing i feel like people whip out when what they really want to say is '*I* didn't like this'#which is fine! nobody is forced to like anything#but it is perhaps not meeting the material on fair ground#ultimately it's going to be up to personal opinion though#asks#greenestcoat#i'm also like. all of 9 hours into this VERY LARGE FEELING game. so take MY opinion with a grain of salt too
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white americans will be like oh british food is so unseasoned and underspiced and then talk as if taco bell is extremely flavourful. this is true I've seen it happen multiple times.
#red said#and yeah i have had American taco bell. it was fine. not exactly heavily seasoned though is it.#a cheeky nandos would fold these people in half like paper. they'd be those people who think medium is a test of will#it's just that when people talk shit about British food they seem not to have noticed#that our stereotypical national eating habits have for the last 50 years involved less jellied eels and more vindaloo#and now there's a lot to critique on that front too#such as the fact that your traditionally White British Dude approaches curry less as a tasty foodstuff and more as a masculinity challenge#so like. famously British Indian takeaways tend to flatten out flavours and focus on heat when catering to British tastes#idk what The Average Brit cooks at home bc it's obviously different family to family.#fryups are a solid reliable. roasts? but i feel like mostly pasta soup and pies? i mostly do curry bc it's cheap to make it taste good.
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it seems as if there are two options for my classes tomorrow (1. snow is so bad my school calls for a snow day 2. snow is not that severe and so there's no need for a snow day), except there's actually a secret, third, evil option: snow isn't bad enough at my school to cancel class but is bad enough where I live to prevent me from going
#the woes of living an hour and a half away from your campus 😭#we're supposed to get a big snowstorm tonight and i am Praying to God that they just cancel class#bc even though my professor is (thankfully) understanding of my situation and told me it's fine if i needed to stay home#it's Critique day in both my classes and i really really don't wanna miss that 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻#marie speaks
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saw someone unironically using the term "feminazi" in 2025 like bruh
#like yeah its fine to critique aspects of feminism and how certain feminists act online#but the moment you go all 2014 anti sjw type shit im not listening to you anymore#i used to follow this person and they disapeared only to post this#and also about how ppl arent talking about neil gaiman enough which is??? ive seen so much shit about him in the past few days#idk what alternate world this person is living in#i had to unfollow them even though i liked cuz they were a cool selfshipper#but they just keep saying they're leaving tumblr bc of all the drama they get but then come back after a year to post this#like what???#vagueposting#this isnt really a hate post towards them im just confused about their behavoir
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I am on a mission to learn how to draw can you believe these are literally only 4 days apart I’m feeling so pussy pussy cunt cunt rn
#also I know it doesn’t look like Marcia I literally today learned how to draw facial proportions I can’t fuck around too much yet#also I liquified her she wrong so it’s a lil fucked up but#I’m v proud :)#didn’t even touch hair or body or anything but that’s fine I just want to learn to draw Marcia’s face right#that’s goal one#I will not rest until I get this down#I will become the expert in drawing Marcia’s face#also do you love that I can’t remember any makeup look except the red and white one#I’ve used it for like 6 drawings of her now#anyways it’s crazy what a single 10 minute video on how to properly proportion a face can do#also I don’t know what my style is yet bc I just started so obviously that factors into things#anyways!#artist advice is always welcome critique might (will) make me cry :)#encouragement is always… encouraged 😉#anyways I’m v happy with myself#even though I opened the canvas and lost track of time and blinked and it was 2 am#also can I just say it took me a few tries but I’m loving the lettering on her name :)#okay that’s it I’m going to brush my teeth and fall asleep#also I’m still trying to figure out all the secrets of procreatepls aid#marcia#marcia x3#marcia marcia marcia#drag race fanart#my art#also there’s only a one hour difference between how long it took to do these that’s so funny#wow#also in my defense!#I was trying out different styles so I was trying to copy a more cartoonish style#but still :)#also it looks so warm on my phone rn bc I have night mode on but the colors are so pretty on my iPad :) and presumably here once night mode
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the thing is i actually think you might find parts of the live action bay transformer movies interesting. that said they are an acquired taste.
‘tis the case with most late stage, mass-market-audience-chasing adaptations. enough interesting tidbits to torture you but packaged in at least a partial disaster
#ill probably watch them at some point i just legit had a hard time latching onto live action characters. those are Real Guys. i can’t be#obsessed with a Real Human it’s rude . silly little drawings are fine though#accidental superpower against parasociality. i watch a lot of live action films and critique them but those are Actors Playing Characters#and i will never get that out of my head when watching them. i can suspend my awareness better with animation . muppets fall in between
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my irl writing critique group is very cool and insightful, although mostly made up of white men. they write great female protags and aren't particularly gross so far bc it's portland, where writers generally have the common sense not to be The Fucking Worst. however the vast majority of this group have expressed VISCERAL discomfort with graphic horror and violence against children / vulnerable people -- again, because they're a good normal group of dudes & a lot of them are either teachers or dads. but it also has me like. [kicking the princess luz fic behind me] haha omgg meeee...? nooo no i write horror but it'll be SOOOO easy to digest, i promise..... i'm Very Normal...
#cant decide if i'll choose an on-brand horror piece for my first crit or a boring fluff piece#i can wait to decide though. people just offer pieces to critique as they have em theres no set rotation so#it's fine. i'm already established as having the darkest fiction taste in there so theyll expect it
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(Last Anon) Definitely agree, I think I saw an old post that said Blossom seems to be the favourite/popular depending on which side of the fandom you’re in.
VSB seems to be the more casual/animation fans’ least favorite episode, they usually put it on the same level as the worst episodes from season 5/6 (the audacity! Lol) Blossom is usually ranked the least favorite, I guess it goes to show that they don’t understand her character at all or refused to accept her as anything but flawless. Also yeah, never understand why Town n Out is up there too, honestly it does felt like these people don’t understand the show they’re watching and claimed to love so much.
It actually never occurred to me that she’s a bad liar, since all 3 Girls are pure and good I thought its a trait they all share, but I guess Blossom would probably have a hard time with it than her sisters. I think she’d be smart in deflecting and not telling the whole truth but also not lying either technically.
I think I’m just dreading for all the weird tweets Craig’s going to receive when the reboot comes when those fans sees their favorite characters not act or act in a way that doesn’t fit their headcanons. Lots of super weird takes on twitter about “buttercup would hate this” or “bubbles wouldn’t do that” etc etc they only know the flanderized version of these characters, its almost like how the reboot2016 sees them…
Re: not understanding Blossom, I’ve known people who told me she’s their favorite character because she’s an unfeeling, uncaring killing machine who doesn’t let emotions get in her way (???) and others who’ve said they love Blossom for her docility and strong emotions and susceptibility to fall for evil (also ???). Legitimately bad takes about Blossom are weirdly common. I don’t get it! She’s so awesome but there’s so much rampant mischaracterization from fans with her (even the reboot basically just made her Lisa Simpson and added that unfortunate character I think all of us don’t want to talk about as an unnecessary love interest, sheesh…).
And yeah, Blossom’s definitely the most goody-goody of the three girls, and sometimes to a fault. I always think of her in Fallen Arches where she sticks soooo hard to what she strongly feels is morally correct to the point where a bunch of elderly people end up beating each other up and have to go to the hospital. And Bubbles and Buttercup are pissed after telling her how dumb of an idea it was the whole episode. 🤣 Or when she (initially) refused to use her ice breath power to save Townsville because she didn’t want to break the vow she’d made to never use it again while her sisters were frantically trying to tell her why it was okay to use when a freaking meteor was headed towards the town. Her sisters don’t normally have those same reservations she does despite also being good kids. I think all that stuff (plus the bad lying lol) all stems back to her pride and her desire to be the most perfect and goodest good-doer who ever did good. …and again, haha, I love that and it’s entertaining to watch when she struggles with stuff like that.
To be fair, if any of the more out there asks I’ve gotten over the years (especially the ones asking me to pass along stuff to Craig) have taught me, I think he’s already gotten enough weird messages about the PPG and seen enough wild takes to last a lifetime. 🤣 I mean, people were angrily messaging him about the 2016 reboot and that he needed to change it STAT. Someone will find something to complain directly to him about and I’m sure it will more or less be ignored.
#meanwhile I’ll just be here in my own little corner of the internet being a PPG fan hermit and critiquing/hopefully fangirling over things#all by myself lol#I never get people who decide to like DIRECTLY go to people to complain like that#you really think that’ll do anything?#‘‘oh no xx-friezaboner98-xx pmed me and said they hate Buttercup we have to scrap her team’’#‘‘let’s send the script he sent me to the animation team while we’re at it I trust him more than I trust my life’’#like idk I’m fine just talking about this stuff myself without any input from show people#whenever I complain it’s usually just for the sake of complaining so… yeah lol I know nothing can be done#it’s still not fun to read though I totally understand where you’re coming from
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i am SO fucking exhausted by mainstream media opinions lately and i don't understand why they're frequently SO different from my own? like i genuinely don't think i am approaching anything from that unique of a perspective as a viewer? maybe it's just that i'm too easy to please when it comes to stories or something but like. how is the mainstream, widely accepted consensus on yellowjackets season 2 is that it's "bad" and "doesn't work as a season" and is "riddled with problems." literally what the fuck are you talking about. this is the most fun i have had watching television uhhhhh literally Ever? you're telling me people hated Burial? how? why? like i don't...i just don't GET it. and i'm not playing dumb for kicks here im like genuinely honest to god confused. that was the single best episode of television I've ever watched in my life. like i get that people have different opinions about things and that's fine but HOW am i in the minority here what am i missing
#most of the critiques I've seen are that it 'focused on the adults too much' and was 'too weird' re: mistys sequence#like??? that was clearly supposed to be funny and campy and silly and artistic and a twin peaks homage?#and the 'focusing on the adults' i... i mean i guess some people are just here for the '96 mystery#and are completely uninterested in the psychological effects it had on all the characters?#i guess some people don't?? care??? about watching them wrestle with that trauma and go on to try to have lives#after something like that?#but like. that's the entire point of the show though. if you hate that why are you watching it every week#with enough investment to like. blog about it and put energy into writing whole ass thinkpieces#so much of media criticism these days boil down into 'i wish this show was Not the show that it is'#'i wish it was this other show that im writing with my twitter mutuals'#and like that's fine and fun and cool and valid and that's what fic is for! but a show isnt BAD for committing to itself and its own vision#like. there is something sooo sexy abt a piece of media that is so wholly itself that you have to meet it where it is#and judge it by its own metric#it creates a whole new unique lens for each and every thing you love! quit comparing apples and oranges!#it's SO fucking fun analyzing different pieces of media through the lens of their own little world and conventions#and guiding principles and plot pacing and what they choose to emphasize and their genre conventions and etc etc#it's FUN! and not to sound like a pretentious film bro dipshit but like why does it seem like this is a dying art these days#'s2 is boring' THEY. THEY ATE A PERSON. ARE WE WATCHING THE SAME THING
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ONE FINAL LEFT!!!!
#critique tmrw bluhhh. my final piece is kind of half-assed but like. i literally could not make it into the studio at ALL last month & my#grade is fine. so. shrug.#txt#so tired though... can't wait 2 b done n play p5 n talk 2 my phone friends!!!
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Just dropped another fic. I really just have no patience for anything, especially untagged shit. As per usual, I will leave all whining to here.
#i don't critique anything#not anymore#but also most people do not want critique#which is fine#it's fanfic#that shit is free#who am i to complain#though it is hilarious that people then whine about comments being fluff or nonexistent#dude I'm sorry#the fic was fun until it wasn't#you lost me at a stupid or unnecessary injury#yes this shit happens irl#but I'm not here for rl#I'm here to read my blorbos doing stuff or falling in love#though i rarely see that in my current fandoms#god i wish things were fun and not drowning puritian bullshit
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I finally got what a fandom was about and it only took me 6 minutes and I only had to use that part of my brain that likes thinking about stories
#''This shit is so weird this doesnt even exist in canon where did you get this lore?'' [Remembers my interest in myths and legends] ''OOHH''#WELL WHEN YOU LOOK AT IT THAT WAY I GUESS IT DOES MAKE SENSE DOESNT IT#This only applies to 1 fandom ive seen and it is probably not a good comparison but its interesting.#Its interesting its interesting. How people / fans want to and try to connect everything. Making their own MYTHOLOGY!!!#Even if its not consistent all across the board because people will interpret things differently!!! Thats fucked up!!! Thats interesting!!!#nillas#Got pissed off at the fanon lore stuff when i first looked through the tag but yea i get it now#If i see any other fandom thats not the same kind as the one im talking about here pull this shit though you knoww im gonna vague post#My only critique about the fandom now is just the lack of respect on these women's names but thats fine i guess [Clenching my fists]
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finished hellblade 2!!
#*hi hello this is sarah speaking#I have thoughts and feelings#however mainly I just want to say that the changes to combat... meh#I found the combat in the first game really satisfying#I'm not a fan of changes#I understand that people didn't like it as much so they put in the backseat#That's fine that's fair whatever#But it just felt like such a setback? And it was just all completely evading#I understand we're fighting actual people now so they know how to block but it's still just sucked#And also the fact that the voices don't help you anymore in fighting or in puzzles#like I understand everyone found them very annoying#I loved them yelling at me and not just critiquing me#I understand that that implies really weird shit ignore that part of it#I liked being told when to evade#I understand now that you only fight one enemy at a time so it doesn't matter as much but like#And also having the final “boss” be a fight??? questionable#The story though magnificent I understand that what they were going for is story based with minimal gameplay to just immerse you#they did amazing on that it was spectacular
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